For the love of Starbucks

First of all if you used a mouse AS a drawing tool, freehand this is a pretty amazing piece, Like those people who draw The Mona Lisa with an etch a sketch.

My first reaction when I saw this was that it looked like a card, I like the idea of people sending Starbuck's cards as get well or to mark special occasion. "Get well soon so you can go to Starbuck's!" OR "Christmas Just got Merrier" It just made me happy.
ANYWAY The colors are great The composition is excellent. Sometimes placement of just a few objects is more difficult to get right than if you have many objects. I like that you chose to let things run off the edges of the page, I am always more intrigued when I am brought closer into a space. I know what the end of a straw looks like and if I have forgotten what the corner of the logo looks like, well its right there on the cup to remind me. I do not mind the few places where the lines look a bit jagged or rough, as a matter of fact I think it adds to the piece, I get very tired of all the over polished work out there where perfection becomes more important than what anybody has to say or any emotions that are evoked. Its just raw enough to avoid that while still being technically very good.

I gave 4.5 for originality only because well its Starbucks. I had a 4.5 for impact as well for the same reason then realized that for a Starbucks piece it had a pretty big impact, so I put it in its place and gave it a 5. Nice piece